To be honest, I'm kinda having trouble reading the last part. I almost given up due to the "feels" its been giving me.

I still hope hope, within my heart, that you will continue to write this beautiful and fascinating story. I hope you are doing alright, and are in good health. My best wishes to you Aulani.

This fascinating Jelsa story was one of the fantasy stories that inspired me to write. Really loved the intricate details you wrote, particularly the romantic moments between Jack and Elsa. Seemed you have lost interest in updating this wonderful story which deserved to have more readers and followers. I liked Vega as an original character, she had a potential to be a great friend to Elsa. As for Anna, hoping that she and Elsa willl reconcile again. I love the mythological influence especially the Cupid and Psyche love story which was the best story to describe Jack and Elsa’s love story ;-) 5 stars out of 5 stars!

pls pls pls update i love this story. it different from the other jelsa fanfics ihv come across.. good different not bad... now im just rambling... plsplspls continue this

sooo cute... fangirling over here...

is vega the godess vega? and she knows abt jack being the jack frost rite... cant understand why he cant recognize her...

this is pretty darn awesome i love it...(the next rick riordan is awakening)

Omg love it. Plz update soon!

Omg, one of the best stories I've read here . I dearly hope you can still update this story! I kinda internally cried when I saw the last update was last year :'3

Oh My Goodness. That was awesome! I love it! Especially the descriptions, when Jack first arrived and the cab reminding him that he wasn't just a college kid.-loved that line, I guess because it makes me feel like this fascination/attraction he has for Elsa makes him forget he's a god. its just so strong it just makes him feel and be.

and then when he was left dumbstruck when he finally saw her and realized that all the wonders of the world (and even the other goddesses) were nothing compared to her-GOLD! though I don't remember who Sloan is. my question is-has Jack had a love interest before this? I'm just curious. and that line where he says he's willing to be drowned buried and burned for her-well I wonder, once pitch enters into the picture, what is he going to be willing to do? will he be blinded by his attraction and stuff? one of the things that always fascinates me is the whole 'duty vs love' thing. i find it so complex in a way, but maybe its just me cause I tend to over think things. oh! and before I forget, the whole Vega wondering who is this nervous boy-I loved that line! it just shows that this change in jack when Elsa is around is so visible! oh and once more I return to my when gods turn human-train of thought..how do they get money?

I can't wait to see the talk between Jack and Vega. I hope Vega fills him in, I mean he's already part of it, I feel, now that he has connected himself to elsa. I also wonder if they found samantha's body.

as for the beginning of their date! Love! so nice and so palpable. great job! Aww. thanks. dear, I love this. please don't stop writing! I can't wait to see everything come together, and I'm also looking forward to when things turn rather dark! hope you update soon-ish.

Alright. I did not expect a visit to Maine, I honestly thought it wouldn't show up again. I'm glad it did. Okay...so Vega is investigating these murders... you know I always think about how gods will take human form and stuff and walk around and then I wonder how do they create their identity? like do they have a Drivers license and social number? lol. but that's just me thinking about the technicalities of being someone in the sense of having identification

First part was really melancholy with Elsa and it felt like she was having an epiphany while thinking of Anna and her choices. its always easier to run away from things than face them head on. and even then I feel like unless you wanna move on, there is nothing someone else can do since no one can do anything for you. i liked the red dress though. and is Vega in two different places at once?
My friend loves Grimm, I couldn't really get into it though. well on to the next chapter. the date! yes!

I had to log out cause I can only post one review per chapter signed in. Anyways, I re-read this chapter to get the flow for the next one. It has been a while again. I'm quite late, sorry! :/

I have to say there are always new things that pop out when you reread something or maybe you just happen to be in a different place and notice other things. This time what really really popped out for me was the last scene. I think before when I read it I was so damn excited that Jack and Elsa met that I kinda glossed over what Jack said. lol. it was just like...omg yes! he said all of this! but now, as I read it more slowly, I'm like...damn...like seriously...damn...this scene is very touching. there is so much going on. He realizes she's sad and he honestly-like truly wants to do something about it. they don't feel like empty words, they are so sincere and in a way I feel like he's baring himself to her...opening up himself. being vulnerable I would say because saying something like that to someone is being vulnerable since there is always the chance that the person will say no. so I think this was quite sweet considering he's a god and all. and the way I see it, it may seem like its all simple superficial stuff-like smiling, laughing but its not. anyways i don't know if that made sense, but that was what I got from it this second time around. sooo sweet. well onwards to the updates. :D

amazing and wonderful work i love it! please keep it up!

well this just chapter produced purely happy squeals /well in my case hahah and i hope that george martin will do just that i mean is he even aware of the heart break he's putting us through? like seriously season five pls hahaha AND i can't wait for part 2 of their date :D

:D I'm touched! and thank you so much for the wonderful (unintentional) Halloween present (and all the sweet, sweet, feels-y goodness of Jelsa flirting, chemistry, and interactions)!