This was pretty good. :) And good job the English. Though, you seemed to forget to refer to Francis's body parts as "his", instead you used "the". And you forgot some of the past tense verbs' "-ed" at the end. But overall it was easy to read and funny too!

ShineBrightLikeAGilbert
Lol i love that name for him so much that I was laughing for like 5 minutes!