This started well but the writer is messing it up

Rukia does not deserve any of this crap,I really wonder when will he stop this possession about Hinamori

I just finished the story so far. it's very enjoyable. i hope you finish it in your free time! i look forward to your up date. If this is the final chapter I hope you do a sequel showing Rukia dealing with Toshiro PTSD while she's helping him remember

My heart broke for Rukia. That's got to be rough!

So was it Toshiro or Toshiro's inner beast who was inhaling Rukia's scent? Since both seem to like her. Anyway great way to start a case

Toshiro's actions fit him especially since he's a werewolf... and Rukia well she just went after the killer for revenge. she didnt think to much about it expect vengeance.

and the plot thickens! Rukia chasing him for vengeance hmmm... Kaien maybe?

awesome intro to case four! can't wait to find out about Rukia's past with the killer. i think Shiro chose to guard her when he was passing out orders that's cute!

seems like Rukia interest both forms of Shiro! how cute!

wow! didn't see that twist on the case. i thought she was a random girl who knew the perp.

Rukia got caught drooling! can't say I blame her though. Case #2 off to a great start. murder and mystery!

Toshiro's eyes changed to yellow a little huh? ohh will thus be a supernatural crime story? you'd have a ton of possibilities there!

i love how you wrote Toshiro! He's such badass! Also good conclusion to case 1

you did good leading up the the first case! Simple is good when it's Rukia's first one then you can build to it or have all of them linked by a someone they all missed or just over looked who had an alibi. Rukia's photographic memory is amazing. she'll be quiet handy in any case she's on. I'm sure this with definitely get her a lot of brownie points.

I'm squealing like an idiot when I see you alive and kicking and update the fic, lol. What, you're studying animation? Awwww, please, you'll have to draw HitsuRuki! :333

Okay, back to the story. I just went to re-read some of the previous chapters to refresh my memory. The recent pictures seem to me more like serial clips from a film. Guess I need more information to throw more light on Shiro's present state. He would've died two years ago. I mean that beast completely took over Shiro's body at that point. But somehow he managed to survive. How? And now, it looks like it completely merges with Shiro but what happened to its will?

The truth that Toushiro could only remember Momo under his current condition made me sad. Oh, Shiro, open your eyes, see who exactly is always by your side and feel your pain. Poor Rukia... It's too bad that the monster never stopped haunting her, and Toushiro, whom she's in love with, even couldn't recognize her.

Thanks for the new chap anyway; Hope you'll give us relatively fast updates, Please? ;) I have to read what happens next soon.