The story was great the only thing I would want you to change is Kagome not being able to have anymore kids. And omg girl you broke my heart when you let her fall into grandpa's hands I wish she didn't leave for so long it makes me sad when how you ended part one that sorta things kills relationships and I want Kagome and toga to last forever they are the perfect couple. Also I dont see part two anywhere I will save hopefully one day you return and post more of ur work your great! Your the only person on here that has made a beautiful toga and Kagome story you don't even know I was so stuck into this story I couldnt stop reading it.

Um... had 3 babies and not once was i that horrible... wtf

Good. Very good.

so Kagome goes from miko warrior to submissive kimono wench that looks utterly rediculous not going to happen in any life time she is a miko so dress her like one and wear a kimono for your self or if you don't too watch youtube on kimono dressing and walking...

on top of that the Shikon was created 500 years before InuYasha's time so it would have been around by then... it's called research... you should try it... it makes for better stories... facts are needed...

So, I really like this story but with what happened with the daughter, its a bit... underwelming. Its a bit forced feeling and, i feel like the grandfather could be used a bit more creatively. The little girl isnt exactly... responding realistically. Perhaps if there was more of the family fighting about what happened, or if this was used against her. A passing comment or she over heard her parents talking, but its a bit too convenient that the grandfather was there. I feel if you flesh out what happened, the over reactions. maybe Inuyasha snapping at his sister that he'll never get another sibling, or being over protective of his mother with sesshomaru trying to comfort her and explain WHY it happened, Talk through her and fighting with their father with a line of
"This never would have happened if you just let her train, Father. I know the importance of protecting our females, but if your human mate was anything to go by, her raw power alone will attract many enemies. She should learn how to fight so unwanted males could not force themselves on her, or she could defend her mother. It is your fault the pup is lost, stop blaming your only Daughter."

This sort of fighting could flesh out the daughter if youre going to follow her at all. or simply do not follow her point of view and remain with Kagome. Focusing on what she's seeing, her feelings and reactions as you most have been doing.

The first line of the chapter is Kagome whiles the sweat from her brow...but I’m here to ask you is one not entitled to sweat of their brow? No Saya the man in Washington it belongs to the poor, no say the man in the Vatican it belongs to god, no says the man in Moscow it belongs to everyone.

I rejected those answers; instead, I chose something different.

I chose the impossible.

I chose... Rapture.

A city where the artist would not fear the censor.
Where the scientist would not be bound by petty morality.
Where the great would not be constrained by the small!

And with the sweat of your brow, Rapture can become your city as well

gagging in the background ? that sesshomaru

lol, yeah is beast is not so intellectual, maybe a little moron and pushy but ... yeah maybe so maybeee the beast fuck it up in the other timeline pretty bad

this "that is not my armor" give me life is perfect ... i love this lecher of Inupapa so perfect so gloryous so jfjdjgjsk

#1 favorite pairing by far!
Kagome needs a man. Not a boy(InuYasha).

Love this story already!

cue, not que.

Before I forget cause I continue reading. A big YES PLEASE to the sequel with Tsukiko! Your story is unusual with Touga and that's why it intrigues me. I love your writing style!️

How could you just end this here and why didn't you just delete it instead of leaving it like this

Horrible ending.

Hi!

This was awesome! I loved how the story developed! You are a very talented author!