Please don't abandon this story. You have real talent and this story needs an ending.

Please make more !,

10 out of 10 write more

More please! What happens next?!

Hey you said the girls have to watch the boys eat but sometimes they get to each with them sitting on their lap. Can you please do Wendy sitting on peters lap?

Write more please

MOOREEE!

I think it not bad but I think u should let pan be nice to Wendy u did a good job I really love the story but it really cool ur best friend
Jane pan :)))

OMG! This is amazing.
Please update soon. I loved how you portrayed Wendy's and Peter's personalities. Exactly how I'd expect these OUAT characters to be. I wonder why James needs that key...
I wonder what Bae needs to talk to Wendy about...
All so mysterious but the main thing: I can't wait to see what's in store for DarlingPan!

Update!

Please update sooner, this is really good. I can't wait for the rest.

I don't think people understood the warnings you clearly set up? First of all AU is clearly written there, so that resolves not being connected to OUAT canon. Second of all, people aren't sponges. No one in this day and age actually condones kidnapping and rape, this story isn't even done yet people don't know how this'll turn out (going out on a limb here trusting that you know what you're doing). Third, I'm getting this hint that you're a seasoned author and interested in how this plays out.

This fan fiction was horrible it had nothing to do with OUAT and there are lots of of other things wrong with it.

Please... Continue. Is really grat. I loved this

please update soon!