Stumbled upon this story. It was really good. Must say that at first I was hesitant to read the story as I wasn't a big fan of Harry's attitude in the first few chapters, but I was curious about the story line plus it was written well/properly so I kept reading. And I am glad! It was great! A job well done! Thank you.

(I'm French so sorry for the mistakes) I absolutely loved it! I usually don't read such long fictions, so I started by telling myself that I was just going to read the first chapter and the last to see how it will be over ... but impossible to stop! At no point it was boring, there was always an event, I laughed, I cried, I was totally taken by the story! The characters are really well done, there is no exaggerated and neither "nasty" bashing who suddenly become saints, on the contrary each one continues to fight for his convictions without side of "light" or "dark". All this magic make dream ! I really congratulate you for this magnificent fiction !

I love you. Lol. But really, that was perfect. Loved the story. Thank you so much for working so hard on it and putting it out there. Congrats and I look forward to your future works.
Your fan,
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I love this story! I love that Narcissa, Lucius, Draco and Snape are very,UCD themselves, while still (gradually) thawing toward Harry.

Your plot is well developed and keeps me reading.

The jumpy behavior of the thestrals makes me concerned that something will happen to Hermione or one of Harry’s other friends on their trip home.

One thing I keep seeing in this story: peruse means to read carefully. Pursue means to follow in chase. Purse as a verb means to press together. You've been using pursue when you meant peruse (although once you used purse). This and other word use errors (then vs than, affect vs effect, and many others) are all that keep this story from being truly fabulous. They throw me out of the story each time I see one, and I have to take a moment to figure out what you meant. (A spelling and grammar beta reader would help here.)

Still I keep reading, as the characterizations and plot lines are delightful. Thank you for writing!

i am positivly in love with your fic! can't wait for more

Wow wow wow! I can't believe this story is finished! It's been so much fun reading and re reading this story and I love the ending.
Whenever I talk to my mates about fanfiction I love I always mention this story cause it has so many elements I love that you don't often find. It's a really cool idea and you perfectly balanced the angst and drama with the happier moments. I love that we got to see good!malfoys and snape but also an involved Lupin. All the parental figures were written really well and I'm sure this story will remain on my to read again list for a good long while.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing your work with us all 3 Good luck with all your future writing endeavours :D

Great story! I am so glad I read it. Thank you, very much, for sharing it. 3

Update!

Thank you so much for writing this! I've been loving this fic, and I almost don't want it to end! But this was very well done! I love the entire fic!

This has been a terrific read, thanks for sharing. I'll definitely be back to read the last chapter. So Voldemort was killed?

interesting fic so far.

Glad that Harry's on the mend. Perhaps an alternative way to feed Harry the information that Dumbledore is supposed to teach him risk free would be having Severus, Narcissa or Lucius tell him in his stead. Riddle wouldn't expect that one so perhaps that's a way around this possession complication. Guess I'll have to read on to find out how you handled it here eh. *smiles* Glad that Draco and Harry are getting to know each other better.

Glad that Lucius told him about the horcruxes. Relieved that Harry interfered in what Malfoy was doing to the headmaster. Unfortunate that Severus was the one to break them up. Harry and Draco're definitely in for it now. Keep up the excellent work.

I felt bad for Remus having to go through the transformation without the wolfsbane potion. Unfortunate for those Hogwarts students who were infected. Glad that Lucius didn't give Draco up for the cause. Thanks for writing such a fantastic fic.

Excellent first chapter.