omg this is absolutely, ridiculously, amazingly good.

You could have made an obi-wan reference with the negotiations

Can we kill Arathorn and Amora to save trouble?

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Adrian isn't a Potter? Then why put "Harry Potter" in the character list? Did you want to deceive people into reading about your OC?

That great story please update soon.

This is definitely a great story. I love how independent Harry is. I also love the blacksmith thing. It seems like a cool skill to have but it’s very unusual for a Potter story. Thank you for writing this.

So, Fenrir's encounter with Greyback is rather... anticlimactic, honestly i expect to see Fenrir toying with Greyback aand the reactions of Greyback's pack to the big wolf, the fact that you gave Greyback an instant death is just disappointing.

You like to contradict what you, yourself wrote/say..Lily isn't Adrian/HP real mother..YOU SAID so yourself..James adopted Harry into the Potter Family and so did Lilly..Adopt him also..YOU said both are his ADOPTED parent..Lily "carried" him, yes, but you never said or mentioned that biologically if Lilly used her own egg..I assumed not, since YOU said, Harry isn't blood to either James and Lily! Which is it? Throughout the story, you contradict yourself on THIS thing and the whole 1yr and the marriage cotract is Null and VOID YET even after 2yrs, Harry was afraid that he'd still have to marry her? WTFH is that? Something about her magic and his..What part of Null and Void did you mean, if at all..

Stupid writing there..I don't know, you just seem so indecisive and messy when it comes to YOUR OWN story/writing.

You're either contradicting yourself in regards to Harry being a Potter or not. Lily only CARRIED Harry; she not biologically his mother and from what you already said, Harry is NOT a Potter..Sure, James adopted him but that's it..

It's all very confusing still.

How can Nick get grey hairs? He is BALD! Do you mean as in sociological/mental thing or as in a physical thing?

It has been 5 years since the last update. Would be interesting to see this finished.

re-reading this again..lol..its a good story n hoping that u will update soon

Update please

KEEP WRITING PLZ