Reviews for What's the Worst That Could Happen |
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![]() ![]() Please update soon, dying to know what happens next :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you update soon, really good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really interesting story I would love to read more! shame you haven't updated since April :( |
![]() ![]() Woah I love this story! |
![]() ![]() love this mmm |
![]() ![]() keep wrighting |
![]() ![]() It's a good, decent story but could be a lot better if you went back and fixed your grammatical errors and typed out dialogue the correct way. For example: "Hi, I'm Keely," the girl said. "Hi," the boy replied. "I'm Jack Mercer." "Nice to meet you, Jack. "You too." And it would make your story a lot easier to read, as well! Can't wait to see what you do with this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz update soon cant wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Please continue. I have to know what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() please, please, PLEASE, continue. its really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thus beginning of this story is great |