Very good please continue

Great so far

you should keep going this story is very good

Technically every door hangs off its hinges

This is a pretty good fanfiction but why does Chaos tell them that Percy is guardian of the hunt and just does he leave them there instead of camp there was no reason that he should of gone to the hunt instead of if he is assassin of chaos why is he being treated poorly by the is guardian as in he has to protect them but instead he has to do a bunch of could kill the hunters if he wanted to so why the hell is he being treated like a slave it makes no sense at all other than that it's a pretty interesting story

*sigh*

...seems like you need to work on time management skills

You named him Moron? And for that reason, I am no longer reading your fanfiction...

Hey there, i just want to let you know that i really do understand what you're feeling with all this stress and lack of sleep. My last 4 weeks of school i think i got a grand total of maybe 12 hours a week? so yeah i can really feel you when you're talking about lack of sleep, and i've had a shit ton of school work i needed to do that I had to get finished while still going to hockey and work. And my work schedule has been really hectic lately with everyone leaving on vacation so i was and still am getting shifts i've never worked before and i was so swamped i actually fainted from lack of sleep and stress, so i really do get you and want you to know i really like your stories and can't wait for an update but i'll be very patient and i'm very understanding so take your time and be sure to get lots of sleep, and Happy Holidays :)

10/7

Please continue this story.

Please update soon xx

Didn't he just kill menoetious? The hell? Hmmm PLOT HOLE!

Hold up. He can last a three hour fight with CHOAS but can't stand up straight when the chores come into play? I question this. I question this a lot. Like a lot a lot. Please explain this train of though to me. Just please. I confused.

Alright now am I the only one that sees the Olympians as a bit too occ? I don't think Zeus would spare even a year for Percy if my read on the guy is correct plus his arrogance levels are over 9000! Its a good story and idea, but it needs to slow down. Get a feel of the characters, create the background and back stories over time. A good example of this is Purgatory. Its a story that's really good with slowing down. Two chapters equal 1 day in the important parts. See what I mean? You have a good story, but I'd love to see it become great.