Oh my, this was wonderful! Please tell me you're going to continue this! There's so much potential here and so much sexual tension just seething between this you. Plus the possibility of some really interesting plot as well. I can definitely see both Kingsley and Narcissa like this, and I can even see someone suggesting that Kingsley attempt to seduce Narcissa, for the "greater good" of course (wink, wink).

This is excellent, and please continue! Well done! :)

Another OMG... and thank you! I love Narcissa/Kingsley pairings, and this one captures their complexity and chemistry *perfectly* Yes, I love it that her keen intelligence, cleverness and seductiveness is portrayed, and the yummy, brilliant, controlled Kingsley is trying to stay strong ;-)

Can we have some more please? :-)

I always have a soft spot for seductive!Narcissa, so I liked seeing that here.
Personally, I think you could have shortened the first part, maybe leave out the scheme to hook Narcissa up with Kingsley and have Olivander /think/ that but not speak it out loud.

The interactions between Kingsley and Narcissa are wonderful. I've never thought about him crushing on her at Hogwarts, but since we don't know his Hogwarts years this could very well be possible. Bellatrix wouldn't have liked it anyway, that's for sure!

I love you made Narcissa not only seductive but also knowledgeable and a bit studious. It's a charactertrait I don't see often matched to her but it fits really well.

You've certainly managed to create lots of tension between them, and I have a feeling that Kingsley won't be able to resist for long, hehe. Congratulations on your honourable mention in the competition!

The plot and development of this were flawless. I loved Kingsley being all macho and Narcissa being a woman determined to prove her worth. It gives a flaw to his character, and at the same time you have a very clever, strong Narcissa. They're still IC, and I love how this means that you very much expanded on their personalities. The interview was my favorite part of this, because they both show a lot of character. Narcissa pwning him definitely plays a part on my overall enjoyment of this.

The aggression/physicality at the end had me just a liiittle bit confused, but it adds to the tension wonderfully well because it's so obvious that they're attracted to each other, and that it's not going to happen, and how Narcissa uses that fact to her advantage... gah I really loved this.

Nice job! Thanks for participating!

Interesting pairing. I would have never thought it, but it works and she is definitely qualified for the job.