What a ruthless ending! I say that in a good way, though. I... I don't know if I should be happy... or sad. This story... Gaahh! It's to hard to put into words! I don't know how to describe how I feel right now, after I had finished this story, but it's making me feel a whole lot! The ending isn't powerful, nor is it anti-climatic, it's just a simple beautiful ending that just has you going crazy over these books. I guess i'd recommend these books to all who'd be ready to read them. Grrrgh! IT'S JUST MAD!

i still prefer the original ending, but this one is very nice ending, very adorable and a little saddening

I can't figure out whether to be mad or happy? :-/

That's kind of a happy & sad ending at the same time.

Is it finished

No is it finished

Is it the end

noo! please make addy part of the events in the day of the doctor. i really want to see the other doctors reaction when they see her.

Next chapter will be good

Hey I just thought of something. Adeline's never met YOUNG Post-Doctor River Song when the Doctor made her live with Amy and Rory to keep her safe? The whole time she was with Amy and Rory, she never her honorary 'aunt', the past BLACK WOMAN (can't remember what her name was in that version of River)version of River Song, who grew up with Amy and Rory since the three of them were kids who young Rory and Amy always had to get out of trouble when she needed them as they all grew up before she died in that body and regenerated into the River Song we all know and love, and sometimes fear? *lol*

You should continue this is good

Why the cliffhanger

I really liked this chapter! I hope that you update soon and I'm hoping that the next chapter won't be the last.

I love this

This is a good sequel