The ultimate betrayal. He’s not even her father!
Lorna was a great addition to this story. Can’t wait for the epilogue.

I like this story and especially the close bond of Olivia and Fitz. I do love this kind of together Olitz just being free to be and show each other love. True soul mates giving each other what they need, not running, not having to face all those daddy issues. This kick-ass auntie tho! Wow! I too have my issues with SR and after reading this story I gotta say, I kinda see why she did not include that kind of character in the show. I mean, Olivia is not the one working through the mess of her life, her auntie is. Auntie is like Rowan in terms of power but the good kind and she really does the heavy lifting for Olivia. She turns out to be the true genius which makes Olivia seem somewhat secondary? I still see her but auntie Lorna towers way above her which is not a bad thing by itself but at the end I don't have as much admiration for Olivia like I do for Lorna. I have read a lot of ways of Rowan dying on here but the one in this story is too perfect... I mean if he were to die on the show, I would want SR to do it this way. Whenever you are ready for the epilogue, I will be checking it out for sure

It's about time Rowan pays for his crimes.

I think the real bombshell was learning Eli wasn't Olivia's father. How is that?

Perfect ending. Eli got what he deserves. Looking forward to the epilogue.

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Great chapter!

Another great chapter and what a way for him to go out great job once again tell next time

The suspense! Can't wait to see what Liv and Lorna have planned for Eli.

I had to revisit prior chapters to refresh my memory. The consensus was S3, that Liv desperately needed a listening ear to talk to outside of work, like an old friend or nosy neighbor. The aunt here is perfect in this role as a wise elder and confidant. The summation of the sick Joke relationship was on point. Liv showing up for Fitz in his time need is the ride-or-die Liv I know & love. Vermont was realistic given the unrealistic circumstances SR created. I hate Poppa Pope. Please kill him off in the 6th and final chapter.

Man, this is such a great story. I've even learned some new words! Can you tell me what other stories you have written

good chapter, wanted more though

I like your story much better than Shonda's!

I absolutely love your storyline. Its so interesting, its what Olivia needs someone who she can open up to and tell her the truth.

How could you leave me hanging. I swear you have papa pope down pact. I'm starting to think you write his monologues on the show. That was too good.

WOW! This is fantastic and I only wished it was played out like this on TV. I will never accept any relationship between Liv & Joke. He's a disgusting pig and should be in jail... SR ruined the show because of her love for SF..

I agree with your last statement of what they have turned OP into...