hope to hear from you again one day

This is one of the only Robb/Margaery fics which can keep up with the realism of ASOIAF. There are so few Robbaery fics our there, and lost of the time they fall in love with each other effortlessly and painlessly. This is a welcome change, and even if it's been an age I hope you'll keep writing!

I really liked your Jeyne Westerling.

I'm late to this party, but I love everything about it.

You have a knack for Marg's voice that I have never seen before. I first got into the franchise through the TV show, so even after getting into the books, it was easy for me to picture Natalie Dormer and forget how young and vulnerable Marg really is. Mourning Renly the way she did makes perfect sense. I had never seen her and a lot of these other characters quite like this, and it all clicks so perfectly. Olenna setting up this particular scheme is exactly in her wheelhouse, and it has been great watching the butterfly flap its wings.

This chapter really shone. Margaery shutting down Robb's preconceived notions about sex got a laugh out of me. I can see this hasn't been updated since 2015, so if this is the end of the road, it has still been a fun ride.

GRR Martin was never a girl. He can never write a silly girls heartbreak not quite like a woman can. You, madame, are a cruel mistress. Thnks for writing. I hope you finish this story one day.

Hmm not a huge fan of Jeyne, unfortunately. But great story nonetheless. Hope to see more of Arya :D She still has one name left, after all ;)

Love all the twists!

Incredible job!

Can't wait to see more Robb and Marg interactions!

LOVE the Arya and Dickon friendship! Not going to lie, the gendry and margaery bits make me a bit nauseous, since I love gendrya. I love the sibling bond between marg and loras, and the interactions between Arya and Cat. Amazing work :)

I LOVE the Arya and Margaery bit. I saw that Gendry was listed as a character, I really hope there will be some Gendrya! I ADORED Loras's thoughts on Arya!
Such a unique story - well done :D

VERY interesting to have a Jeyne POV. Well done! Amazing writing!

LOVE this! Olenna POV was brilliant, and Margaery loving Renly was such a unique twist!

WOW what an incredible first chapter, can't wait to read the rest!

Well written story and all, just not to my taste. Annoyed at Robb for his dumb decisions and the lack of development in his relationship with Margaery (though maybe it's just slow moving).