This is a really good story. It's refreshing to see a romance story that's not one of the two typical stereotypes, namely complete fluff or completely sexual. Instead, here we have a story opening with a very dark theme from an unexpected character (namely Tali) that, although becomes nothing very quickly, for the time it is there it really does add suspense and drama to the story. As well as that, it shows Shepard as a renegade character who's not a total bitch, which is a damn hard thing to pull off, as well as just the right amount of emotional angst that a real person in that situation would be going through. This is a really well written story, with threads of different themes that are totally believable as well as being dramatic.
Well done!

"I can't put duty before you."

Owwww my heart just break! Please give them a ending full of tears and happiness!

Haha, 'Master of douchebaggery'? Excellent chapter. Waiting for more!

Ha, loving the naughty version of Shepard!

Loving this story and the interactions between Garrus and Shepard. It was different than I normally read, but in a good way. And...I don't feel bad for hating Tali's guts. :D