Amazing story! I really enjoyed it!

That was super insightful.

sweet

as always, fabulous and leaving me wanting more.

Loved this! Not at all what I was expecting, based on the title, but kind of sweet in it's own way. Really lovely!

Whoa. This was different and fun and also totally Elliot and Olivia. Loved this.

Loved it!

Oh my goodness this was amazing. There is so much subtext here between them. I like how you were realistic and they never took it farther than they would have on the show. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Coincidence - I just watched a rerun of this episode yesterday afternoon, and I felt sad for Olivia during that scene at immigration, and searched for a story reaction to it but couldn't find one. I think you have captured her reaction wonderfully here. I thought Elliot's slip where he admits that he was 'separated' from both Kathy and Olivia at the time to justify his actions was great, showing his commitment to both. Lovely missing scene.

Perfect as usual. Yeah, yeah, yeah, Elliot is example numero uno of the loving two women at once (but he's only in love with one) ;) ;)

Wow

I really really liked that! It had like the perfect mix of reality and EO. A lot of times the EO is unrealistic, but this was bloody awesome!