ITS BEAUTIFUL THANK YOU FOR THIS

Great story! And yeah, Obi-Wan and Anakin know each other well. I always assumed the former knew about Anakin's secret marriage to Padme, but choose not to tell anyone.

I just wanted to say this is great! Nice to have a version of the "Lawless" episode where Satine lives. Thanks for writing this :)

Love this! Keep up the good work!

I really enjoyed this. Having recently watched "The Lawless" and wondering how Satine could have been saved, this was an idea that I never considered. You wrote it extremely well, and having Anakin there made all the difference.

I really liked a lot of the things you did, from Satine disguising herself in Mandalorian armour to Bo helping them escape. Bo's death was a sad event, but you framed it in such a way that we know it's not in vain. Satine's line of "My sister...she was my sister." was an excellent end to that scene.

I would love to see what would happen once Satine is on Coruscant, and what happens to her as the Clone Wars unfold. You have a solid grasp of the characters and their relationships, and I think you could do some really great stuff with this continuity. My only suggestion is to polish the spelling and grammar in a few places, but that is a quick fix.

Nice work!

CP

That story was amazing and so much less depressing than the original version! So please do alternate stories of Ahsoka leaving the jedi order and of Anakin and padmes fate!

The original Lawless episode was dramatic and all, but there was always one little thing bugging me: why didn't ANAKIN go too? He wouldn't pass up the opportunity to act outside of the Jedi Council's commands... especially when Obi-Wan was doing it too.

Thank you for answering the question of "What if Anakin had gone with Obi-Wan to Mandalore in The Lawless?"

Yes yes I would love a continuity !

You should totally continue! This story is awesome!

This was a very good story and I really liked it. Very good.

Please post more au stories!