a pity, it ended

This is good. You are good too. I could feel the point where you stopped trying to set up the story and were just writing the characters.

Oh my getting good thanks for the chapter and story please update when you get a chance to thank you for your time and talented with the story so far ️️️️️ thank you

It is getting good thanks ️

Thank you

Fantastic chapter ️ ️️️ and story

Getting good thanks ️

Oh my getting good ️️ thank you

Wow getting good thanks

Good start to the story thank you

I loved it thank you hope to see more of this story!

Hahahahhahahahhahahahahaha sh*t. What a cluffhanger.

For Merlin’s sake you really drag this whole thing out.

Uh... this series is full of weird names? All of the Harry Potter names are pretty normal names, especially in a Britain perspective, although I’m not British though. However I do know people who are and they all have similar names. Your name you picked honestly is the most weirdest and must unrelated name I’ve seen in a while. Although the name doesn’t matter to much to me though since as long as you don’t start using it in replace of Harry I don’t particularly care.

... well I like the story but honestly I absolutely loath when authors make their Harry who got summoned lie this much... especially for no reason, since regardless of whatever reasoning you think of, it’s false because there is absolutely no reason to hide who he is and most definitely hide who’s father is Teddy’s. For many reasons, biggest of which is it would do him absolutely no harm and would only benefit him. I’d say more reasons but I’m not going to waste my time on this review which I often do on most of them.