The story is amazing. Please you have to complete it so we can all die in peace!

I’m not one for posting reviews, in fact I’ve never posted one. But I found your story a couple of days ago and I’m completely hooked. I know how much writers appreciate feedback and I’m here to let you know that this is by far the best fanfic I’ve ever read. Keep up the great work!

Oh man, where to begin. First of all, this is amazing. You went above and beyond, especially considering you aren't getting paid. I read all 66 chapters in 3.5 days, suffice to say i enjoyed the story quite a lot!

Now you might be wondering, why didn't i leave a review for a chapter much earlier? I thought about it but was too caught up in the story to stop reading.

Not to mention, all the character development was intriguing, never a dull moment from any perspective. A fluid and smooth integration, and expansion of the story with the movie plot whilst still staying true to the original content! Many have tried and failed so kudos to you for doing it so well! And the love triangle/square/hexagon was really well done. Mainly because it never felt as if it was destined to go one way; that degree of uncertainty was always present. I will admit, all the moments Erik and Elsa had were a strong incentive to want them talking it out for an entire chapter. Many a moment of yelling various forms of "just do it" may have taken place.

I might've forgotten after taking in all the information from your story but i need to ask, what was proposition 4702? Whatever Elsa signed to allow Kristoff and Anna to get engaged. Did it ever get revealed?

Lastly, the overarching story/stories being so enthralling, always leaving you wanting to know more and keep reading. Many late nights, early mornings? Were spent reading on, lack of sleep never bothered me anyway. The closest i get to a one word summary, damn. Every plot point, every character arc being seemingly interlinked with many others, some in ways one could see clear as day, others in ways you'd never dream of all weaving together in the way that they did. This feels as more of a grand enterprise than the game of thrones series, this was a better read too. Maybe i'm biased, but i rest my case.

I could probably write a review about as long as the story itself but i doubt anyone would want to read that. Then again, maybe not quite as long. The real last part: I know in some chapter note you mentioned not being too fond of people asking when an update was going to come out in reviews, this isn't technically that, i still can't help but think this is in that "no-no" area, oh well. It doesn't have to be any set date/time frame or whatnot, but i would like to know, is your writing process on this story still underway? Cheers again for writing a bloody masterpiece, which i will now proceed to reread. Good day/night/evening/morning.

Damn, this is the longest one i've seen since a project's past! Which kinda became "the gold standard" for me when it came to fan work in general. I'm sure this will be great!

I personally think elsa could have made a good enough case to defend herself from the letter using the isolation to her advantage
If she got those powers unnaturally why would she bot tell anyone about them. And lock herself away. Also if she had given herself those powers wouldn't she have had much more control over them. If she had been done as the letter said why wouldn't she just kill everyone in the ballroom that saw it as she had no trouble using the dark arts. She even has one person who could confirm alot of this. Grand pabbie had helped her and Arendelle had several books and maps to find them.
Anyways like the story this thought just happened in my head. Maybe important plot point later?

Wow, I love this story so very very much, I just spent the last few days reading through the whole thing. I love the plots woven into each other and the sub plots very well done. I can't wait to read more of it and really hope I don't have to wait two years. It may make me cry if I do. :P Keep up the good work.

the romance is so sweet! alexander would be a good fit for elsa, its wonderful she has so many people that care about her in this fic unlike in the movie... but Erik really loves her. That scene where hes carrying her unconscious on horseback, but wishes she was healed enough to have her own agency and ride on her own-pure romance!

really loving the story so far! your ocs are quite engaging, and i'm so happy erik is still alive. i hope the medic is too so at least some of the original friend group is intact!

Can’t believe I’m all caught up. The wait for the next chapter and for the resolution to this arc of the story is going to be agonizing. But at least I am comforted by the idea that the Captain and Elsa are finally safe and it didn’t end with a big scary cliffhanger. I see the last update was in November. I sincerely hope you continue with the story. I’m knees deep invested in the story and yes I get outrage at certain things but that’s when you know you have a good story, the reader reacts. This story is definitely getting an alert and hope to see that update one of these days.

I cried. The almost kiss...gosh it tore me up because I was rooting for the kids but then remembered the whole frozen heart thing. So tragic. But seemed like he may explain it to her? Who knows these characters are quick to change their minds.

Then Elsa seemed to have recovered a bit and was kicking ass with her powers just sucked it had to turn out that way. Never a dull chapter in this story especially in these last few chapter.

And what’s this at the end that you’re adding a new villain? We haven’t even resolved this situation! I’m dying over here, concerned for these characters and the situation they currently find themselves in, but now that you mentioned this new villain and I’m now concerned for things that haven’t happened yet! I hope they get a breather more for my sake then theirs. I swear my blood pressure has shot through the roof over these last chapters... enjoying it all the same though!

If these two don’t get together I guess I can console myself with this scene of them pretending to be a couple. They played it well even if it was short.

Progressively worse and I’m in a really dark place now...

PART 4 your killing me hear. I’m beyond distraught at this point.

Feeling like there’s a part 3 of this freaking siege! But how worse can it get?! So many people have died and it breaks my heart...these last two chapters have been an awful, emotional downhill ride. I need some happy news so or I might hit a depression I won’t be able to come back from..

The story and writing are both solid in and of themselves.

What is very worrying though is that this is a "Frozen" story with the listed characters of "Elsa, Anna, and Kristoff". Despite that however, after 10 lengthy chapters this story instead really appears to be about an unannounced OC, Erik, with sprinkles of the actual Frozen characters. I'm guessing that the main Frozen characters get more screen time later on, but this is too much exposition and focus for one OC.