| Reviews for Electrons |
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megamegaturtle chapter 1 . 5/24/2015 This was really tender and sweet. |
sbmoney13 chapter 1 . 8/18/2014 "I thought you didn't like beds," she said. "I don't like sleeping on beds. This isn't for sleeping." You smooth fucker. Anyways, amazing story. I really liked the dialogue and you stayed true to the character. I don't normally do this, but I'll follow you and see what else you have in store. |
Namidaga Ochiru chapter 1 . 8/12/2014 Will there be more? Please say yes. :3 |
ladyspock7 chapter 1 . 6/7/2014 Oh yes, very much like porcupines! They were having such fun with each other's ears I wondered if they would get past them LOL! But seriously, that was a unique and hot premise, the different textures on his fingertips and penis, and the exchange of electrons producing such powerful sensations. the possibility of pain is a pretty serious consideration. I can see how pain at the wrong time and the wrong place, where pleasure is expected, could have a really bad effect on their relationship. They will have to tread carefully, but it looks like they are willing to further explore the possibilities. As Roxanne said, they will do better next time. |
shadewatcher chapter 1 . 4/28/2014 Dawww! Talk about a complicated personal life. XD Heh,then again they do say it's all about the timing. lol |