really nice plz write more

When are you will update?
I've waited a long time and you left me very intrigued. Sorry for the bad English but I'm from mexico. Hugs and kisses ;D

Please update I need to know if Leo's gonna be ok and Don and Mike will find them in time...please

Ooh not good...
Well written, I hope you'll have time to continue !

Ouch...Poor Leo! Please update soon

It would be really bad if Leo's leg was broken. Hopefully its not too injured aside from being trapped.

*wince* ooh...you've got a concussion? that sux...my younger brother got a concussion last year...(long story short, we stopped at red light, and the idiot behind us didn't)
unfortunately, he's also got post concussion syndrome :(
(which basically means the concussion symtoms didnt go away when they were superposed to)
hope it works out better for you!

Good start. Please keep it going! (:

I like it so far. Concussions are bad. But though things are going on, update when you can. Sure the story will be really good.

School can suck when it gets in the way of fun writing time, as can jobs with adults who like to write.

Please update soon! This is really good!

First chapter and I'm already intreged! Can't wait for more!
Good cliff hanger by the way, :) I hope the next chapter comes soon!
-Tori