| Reviews for Rise of the Asari |
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ReynSedy chapter 91 . 7/9 It was a real pleasure to read all theses 91 chapters. I was totally hook by your story. I must admit that I was sad to see half of the team dying, and specially what Aquila did to Miranda's eye (I was in shock during 2 days) but I like Miranda character more than ever. So I hope this story will continue untill the end. Merci beaucoup. C'était fantastique! |
Ulcaasi chapter 91 . 5/28 A FEW CHAPTERS AWAY? THAT-leaves me with some teeeeerribly mixed feelings. Knowing the end is near usually does. But I'm excited(always will be) for what's coming next. This has got to be one of, if not the most, amazing/epic/insane/whateveradjectiveyouwant mass effect fanfic I've ever picked up. Not many fics have me screaming internally(and externally) when an update gets posted. |
kylemajer chapter 91 . 5/17 So we’ve got a coup on the Nexus, while some of the crew going to get Eezo while Shepard and Co. try to find Aquilla. Miranda’s on Shepard’s side now, Liara has Harper at the Citadel, and Alternate Liara is on Aquilla’s side. What could go wrong? Seriously, when Shepard saw Kaiden and he said that Miranda would be lost without him...that made me choke up. Everything with them seems so long ago (which, it was). The whole “Shepard has sex with Miranda” thing still doesn’t sit right with me, but Shepard still loves Liara so...I just wanna see their reunion already. I’m pretty surprised that Aquilla didn’t pull a Darth Vader on Ereyla, she’s definitely a different kind of villain. Don’t apologize for the delay, everything is strange now. I hope everything is okay on your side of the world. Be safe. |
zedd7 chapter 91 . 5/16 Nice chapter! I really like this multi dimensional thing and I was really looking forward to the moment where Jane told Miranda the truth. Glad this was the chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
keller.blair1 chapter 1 . 5/14 Blows up her ship the end power is real great till bullets happen |
KarexN7 chapter 1 . 5/12 I received my notification like 3 am and was very tempted to just start reading.. I haven't yet. Just want to say Yay! Made my day! |
Akari78 chapter 91 . 5/12 HO FUCK HO SHIT HOT DAYUM! When we get some Rise we get some GOOD ASS CONTENT! Holy fuck everything is heating up. I really love the changes from the Milky Way, and how the characters have altered based on the new timeline. Miranda still found Kaidan to be a loyal friend, but Jill and Victor are alive! I freaking shouted with glee at them! Daniel? DANIELLL? Grown up and hot? I did a double take just like Jane. Liara is the veiled asari that’s fucking genius. Peebee is the shadow broker agent. I really liked that shower scene too, really got to play into those vibes and the overall secrecy of the situation. Miranda accepting Jane’s truth so she can save Sidney is top tier. Coraaaaa and Aleccc and a coupppppp? And Ryder! Seeing Ryder is like a shot of adrenaline. Also Milky Way Liara and Val arriving at the citadel shortly before Athilla (I like that). Also fuck me Ereyla is still alive but also like unless she’s somehow super long conning- she’s still loyal. It makes me so mixed on emotions cuz I ultimately want her to come around but it’s also VERY fitting of her character. Athilla also being so shocked and fucking, that’s such good characterization right there. There was so much amazing details in this chapter that just make me even more excited! Eva Coré being EDI still but as a secret? Slick! Jane immediately going “wtf” also good. The narrative moments slipping between Jane, Sidney and Shepard is so gooooooood. Loved it so much. |
Lou988 chapter 91 . 5/12 Where to begin, where to begin. Well, naturally I’ll begin with a FANTASTIC JOB! So I’m really starting to dig the whole dual reality thing. I think what I love the most about it is how so many fantastic characters are still alive! Plus Andromeda gets a lot of hate that I don’t really think it deserves. I really enjoy that you are including the games characters into your story. My heart jumped a bit when I read that Victor, Jill, and Kaiden were all still alive! That’s awesome! I also like how the two realities are so different in terms of how the galaxy views different characters, as well as how characters who are good in the first timeline are now bad. Also, I really liked the reference to liara as the veiled Asari. It’s the little things. You apologized again for how long it took to release this chapter, but you really need to stop doing that. A story this perfect can’t be rushed! I can’t wait for the next chapter! As always, simply wonderful! |
kylemajer chapter 90 . 3/22 I’m not really sure why Miranda is silently judging Jack afterwards, considering Jack actually showed restraint. That might just be Jack’s perception of it, though. I’d say I was surprised, but then again Alternate Miranda saw Sydney as “her creation”. And yay Harper’s alive! :) Yeah, Korria is just gonna get her ass kicked. Some cocky brat going up against a commando? Please. So...maybe the gang will see something related to the artifact? Maybe they’ll see that Shepard is still alive? Then again they’ll see that Aquilla is the Asari goddess, so they better come away with some hope. |
Ulcaasi chapter 90 . 2/15 WHOOOOOOOOOOOO! UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE! You should know by now that any update from you is a worthwhile update. There's always so much that's going on every chapter but I still need to know WHAT IS HAPPENING WITH SHEPARD. I NEED ANSWERS. I gotta say, Corvus being the one to pep talk Vakarian is not something I expected at all, but it somehow just works so well. Still absolutely loving your OCs (clearly). Except Aquila, she can throw herself off a cliff(i bet that won't even kill her). AND THE SHIP LIVES (yay!). AND IS ABOUT TO DIE (:o). AGAIN (ikr). HOW DO YOU KEEP DOING THIS (it's ok keep doing what ur doin). I HATE IT (I don't). THIS IS TERRIBLE (i think you're amazing). STOP UNDERWRITING MY STATEMENTS (sorry!). That last bit somehow just makes it feel like Aquilla is going to appear with some cheesy one liner about how she is the goddess (and this is why I'm bad at writing). |
crisklein chapter 90 . 2/14 OH YESSSSS! BEST VALENTINES GIFT EVEERRR!I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE! THEY WILL PROBABLY REVIVE SHEPARD! |
zedd7 chapter 90 . 2/12 I read your story last summer and I waited for the next chapter with anticipation, and I was not disappointed! I really liked this one and I can't wait for the next one, hope it won't be a long wait! |
imprishsaturn chapter 90 . 2/12 i waited sooo long for this and it was definitely worth the wait. |
Lou988 chapter 90 . 2/11 It’s been soooooooo long! Was it absolutely worth the wait? YES! Val is still alive, which is absolutely fantastic! And I loved the part with Ereyla blocking her thoughts from Aquilla. Sure, she knew what was going on, but it wasn’t like full blown. Korria doesn’t deserve to carry the hand cannon though. I’m kinda hoping the next chapter starts with Ereyla just fucking her day up royally! Hahaha I also love how no matter what, Ereyla cares so much about Val that she’s willing to betray Aquilla in regards to letting Laura leave, despite just moments before being privy to all that Aquilla has planned. The mysterious Cerberus base! Super exciting but totally believable that TIM would have a contingency plan. Also it kinda makes sense that Shepard would be reborn as opposed to just brought back from the dead. Mass Effect is in the future yes, but the ability to bring someone back from the dead isn’t as believable as storing someone’s consciousness. There’s already talks of that being possible in the near future now so totally make sense! Jacks reaction to the whole Cerberus situation was handled so brilliantly due to everything that her and Miranda have been through. It shows that despite her recent slips back to who she once was, her years with Miranda really changed her for the better and allowed her to grow. “I still love you, Miranda.” She said with absolute certainty. So sweet, so precious, but so sad at the same time that they are where they are now. here’s hoping to a happy ending for them though! I loved the interaction between Garrus and Marion. They are so much alike in so many ways and have been through so much. And another suicide mission! Really brings back the feels of ME2! I’m super pumped and excited about where this story is going. 90 chapters (INSANE) and it still grabs my attention! I’ve reread up till this point so many times! So awesome! This story will never get old! Marvelous as always! |
KarexN7 chapter 90 . 2/10 Was well worth the wait. Thank you for sharing this amazing adventure with all of us. You are Keeping us crazy fans going. |