This is soooooooo epic!

SO good!Thanks!

Oh my go! SO good! I'm scared!

You said one more chapter but it is 2020 and still no chapter!

How come put of the twins you always use George?

Man I hope you are not done with this story! You got at least one or two chapters left to do! Unless you got more (tough I don't see how seeing as the war is over). Just finish the last bit man, please.
Keep up the good work man!

Hola! muy bueno me encanto la historia muy interesante espero que lo actualicen pronto besos

love it please write more

Nice interactions between your characters. I especially love Ron and Hermione. I like how protective they are but still act like teenagers. The only one I feel is out of character is Remus (as you can tell i have a personal dislike of the character so this isn't a reflection on you, if anything your version is much better) but the idea of Remus putting anyone else's emotions first as you wrote in the chapter is almost crazy. Remus is invariably selfish throughout the series. Never questions Sirius' guilt, attempts to abandon his wife and unborn child during a war, tells Harry that he should stun people while a 1000 feet in the air if you NOT trying to kill them? With the sole exception of offering his time to teach Harry the patronus charm he never helps anyone.
On the hand i love Sirius despite his flaws and am glad you found a way to incirporate him more into tje story. Trapping Sirius in Grimmauld Place for a year with so many ways to hide with magic always felt like a cop out to me.

It was kind of a dick move to tell everyone the prophesy at once. It was nobody's business but Harry's and he should have gotten to decide who to tell. Also why is Dumbledore talking to Sirius and Remus behind Harry's back? Sirius i can almost undetstand because he is his godfather and has proved that he would do anything for Harry but Remus has never shown that he even particularly cares about Harry. When he isn't outright ignoring him for years on end, he's using the fact that Harry witnessed his mother's murder to guilt him into following school rules. Remus treats Harry terribly. I liked Harry's reaction though, overwhelmed but still stoic and determined.

Why is Harry drinking mystery potions given to him Death Eaters? Even if it was Snape why would Hsrry trust that it was to help him. Voldemort wants information wouldn't Harry assume it was vertiserum or even poison? I don't see Harry blindly drinking it, nor would Harry be at all confident that the Order would be able to save him, after all when has any adult ever helped him with anything?

I thoroughly enjoyed this :)
Some of the chapters need a bit of tweaking but honestly it was great. Most of the time you stayed true to the characters personality and character, which most writers can't really do so well done.
The plot was really interesting and original! I would never have thought of some of the ideas you used.
Thanks for taking your time to write this, 'cus it's nice to read stories that are well written like this one :)
Please update if you find the time! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow, even I, as an author, could never have DREAMED to have a better story than you! It's perfect! It's got everything! Harry and Sirius fluff, Harry and Lupin fluff, Harry/Ginny, Harry 'dead' with people sad and stuff, with a whole lot more. Good job, and maybe continue writing a bit more. You would definitely be great at it! -JessePottler7

*gasps!* Lovvvveeee this story! But I really, really want you to update the last little bit! You did a great job writing all the characters and all the chapters had something exciting In them, poor Moony tho! But at least he's not dead! Yay! :P
~Happy coolios~

I love it! It's amazing, it's well written, and it really makes you want to keep reading it. Sadly it appears that you stopped writing, it's understandable, it happens, but I still have Hope that it's not true. See ya