What a twist.

I missed something. I can't tell if this is young Anakin or vader. if its vader then where is the real skywalker?

The story is interesting so far. But, I think Dooku would be smart enough to read between the lines of his death to anakin and the rise of vader to know he is being used. He shouldnt be this blind. In the Revenge of the Sith novel he was able to figure out his entire purpose that palpatine had for him before his death. If he can figure it out without hands, about to be killed, and betrayed by his with master then you'd think he would know he is disposable to palpatine and maybe... idk... help them.

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u almost made me cry

uhmmn, just make a recording Ani ;)) and Padme seem a bit OC for me

Damn! But glad to hear you're doing a rewrite, I look forward to it. If I may offer an observation, take care with your word usage. Several times a wrong word crops up, 'defiantly' when it should be 'definitely' springs to mind. There are several others. Of course it could be predictive text. Also, sometimes, grammar comes over a bit odd. Hope the rewrite irons out these problems. Hope it isn't going to be 18months between chapters, I’d like to see the finished version before I shuffle off this mortal coil!

the part with Han and family reunions is so funny

yay Obi-wan

No offense but I just sound like Padme Amidala from Star Wars that sounds like someone for my world of which spoiled brat she's ooc it doesn't sound like her at all this is not a bad story but this is probably be dead End before the end of the week it isn't it already

Ooh! Amidala getting jjeeelloouus.

So they don't know the Jedi code of no attatchments. And leia thinks her father is gorgeous