Wendy! You're supposed to be the fairy tale expert; how did you not see that poisoned apple coming? The mermaids have tried to kill you before!

I enjoyed reading this very much.

God bless you,
Shojobaby

This was a very well-written one-shot. I just finished reading the book, and I noticed that your writing style was nearly identical to J.M Barrie's himself! You are a very talented writer; keep up the good work!

Oh my god, this was really cute. I loved it.

I loved how you used the story of Snow White in Peter Pan! :) And I love the ending.

Fabulous work as always!

Ani-maniac494

This is really good i love the story and the idea. X

I love how you mixed both fairytales so well, and I can't imagine how pissed hook is gonna be with his workers xDD

well this is a super big chunk of something beautiful. absolutely beautiful writing.