huh? Don't make any since, it needs to be rewritten.

Really really loved it!

So i liked this, but the end was too rushed. why would someone whose been in a coma for 5 months have the energy to run to the computers and check out the new scans? other than the ending, I liked the story and plot.

good luck on your history essay!

I love this! Perfect! I kinda wanna see this canon :-)

Great job, I loved it! My only question would be if you did a sequel with what happened with Sara and everything about after the rescue if not actually what happened? Either way, talented work, I hope to see more from you soon :)

Please write more of this. Pleeeease!

Oh I hate to think that Felicity would get tortured like this but I am happy that Oliver chose her over Laurel. Loved it!