Realy love this Story, sad you haven't continued it.

Amazing story! I wish you would
Continue it

nice...I hope you continue this story...

Really great story love how things are turning out, excited for whats going to happen to their future! I LOOVE how they are in character. Also I appreciate that even thought this is Gala x Miri pairing, you are taking it slow from the romance and actually building up their characters together.
Anyway, basing from your bio, I do hope you continue this fic. Its been 3 years since this story updated, (lack of motivation, maybe?). Might be shooting at a star here but I do hope you return. Cheers~

Very well written, my friend! The characters are all in character ('specially Deneve and Helen) and the dialogue and storyline are great! I hope to see more from you soon. :3

I just wanted to thank you for keeping GalaMiri alive. No words can really express how happy I was when I saw your fic.

Great story so far. I like the minor tweaks you have done with the original story. I'm looking forward to finding out more about their past and future together.

Well, I think you've answered my question about the relationship between Galatea and Flora.

God Eye has yet to make a good first impression. Oh, Galatea not everyone uses the library for make-out sessions, silly. I'm just hoping that Miria doesn't find out, poor girl would never set foot in the archives again.

While the interactions between them were good, I do think that Miria was a bit too quick to trust Galatea. I think she would be a bit more cautious with telling Galatea her overall objective. With the deal between them I felt that Galatea went too easy on Miria but the mention of Hilda casts it in a new light. God Eye's got something planned and I think that Miria does too so I'm quite looking forward to their meeting in Lido.

Maybe Miria lulling Galatea into a false sense of security? I'm probably wildly off the mark but I do love some tension between them. Whatever happens in Lido, I'm sure your story will continue to be just as enjoyable.

Looking forward to the next update. Thanks for the chapter.

Nice to see a update again! Although this chap was very short compared to the other ones.
Anyway it was nice to see the first meeting of these two. But I personally don't think 5 chaps of this would be very entertaining. Backstory is good but forcing it on the audience all at once is kind of a info dump. You can still do 5 chaps but break it up some with the present. Also In my opinion Teresa's arc in the manga was very out of place. We just met the main character and then we got dumped onto another in the past. It was informative but could've been handled better.
Oh my... I've ranted so much. Whoops. Annnyway update again soon!

I was happy to see an update to this! I really like how you write the characters and build on the relationships

So the lurker of the Claymore stories has finally risen to the challenge. A great few chapters that really capture the differences in personality that each warrior has.

I am however interested in asking if you are writing with the cannon in perspective or diverging into an original story. If you are writing from with regards to the cannon, I do have the suspicion that Galatea does not meet the seven survivors until Rabona seven years later.

As for this that I found puzzling, I am particularly interested in the mention of strawberry wine

So the lurker of the Claymore stories has finally risen to the challenge. A great few chapters that really capture the differences in personality that each warrior has.

I am however interested in asking if you are writing with the cannon in perspective or diverging into an original story. If you are writing from with regards to the cannon, I do have the suspicion that Galatea does not meet the seven survivors until Rabona seven years later.

As for what I found puzzling, I am particularly interested in the mention of strawberry wine in chapter 3 that had no follow up (unless it's a Chekhov's gun).

ANW, I look forward to the coming chapters and the progression of relationships between these warriors.

PS: Need more Flora (No one ever writes much about her)

Welcome back.

This update was worth the wait from Galatea spreading scandalous rumours to Helen's accurate deduction. Fight, Fight, Kiss, indeed Helen.

Galatea's confidence is out of this world! She can charm anybody with just a smile really, but I liked the contrast between her dealings with Miria as opposed to the Ghosts. That touch of vulnerability during her talk with Miria was nicely done. I'm probably getting ahead of myself but it seemed as if Galatea was starting to care about Miria beyond the whole teasing.

Can I possibly request a flashback to that first meeting? I'm terrible but I'd like to see Galatea annoying Miria and her less than pleased reaction. I've also got a hunch that Clare's request is going to create quite a bit of trouble for God Eye.

In regards to the outcome of the Northern Campaign, the portrayal of how each Ghost dealt with her grief was varied and greatly tailored to the individual character. My only suggestion for improvement is possibly a bit more insight into the minds of Cynthia and Yuma.

I look forward to the revelation of the Flora x Galatea relationship and how Galatea fares at playing the double agent.

Thank you for another very enjoyable chapter. Will patiently await the next chapter.

Yay! Update! :D
Anyways, I liked the chapter. We finally got to see Galatea interacting with the ghosts. Nice.

I can't wait for the next one.
-RoxyRoxas1313

I like the story so far. I hope you update it again soon.
-RoxyRoxas1313

Points for adding Dietrich but minus one for hurting her. Poor Dietrich just never has any luck when it comes to God Eye. I admit I'm still chuckling over Miria's comment concerning Galatea's way of life so you can have that point back.

Another enjoyable chapter. I'd liked the balance between the comedic scenes with Galatea and the the much more sombre ones with Miria's gang. It seems nothing breaks Helen's spirits for long. I found the greatest strength of this chapter was the scene between Clare and Miria with the swords and identities. Very interesting take on the weapons. Although, I'd be lying if I didn't admit to liking that final scene. Good to see them on an even footing and indulging in some banter.

Will be interesting to see just how events play out from here. Looking forward to your future chapters.