Ah, the tragic story of Persephone. It looks good so far.

This is one brilliant, brilliant story. I've longed for one like this so long. Thank you thank you thank you. Thank you. You're an amazing writer.

Will he show her Tartarus

now who's uncomfortable

I doubt that's what their thinking.

Girl falls through hole in kingdom and he already has better things to do

like where it's going

This was a really good retelling.

"Watching her closely form his seat..." Form should be from, but otherwise this chapter is great. I'm really enjoying this so far.

This is really great! Love that Cerberus was a dog to be feared. And that Hades will have to replace him if he wasn't. xD Love that Demeter was reasonable. In short, it was really fun to read.

Lovely chapter! :) So Hades never kidnapped Persephone here...

Loved the chapter! I'm excited to read this story! :)

AMAZING story. I loved it.

I really enjoyed this. It was so well written. I loved your version of Hades. While I found it a little too fluffy at moments, I truly adored the romance between Hades and Persephone. Thanks for including Hermes, can't help but love him. Hecate was interesting, funny and I liked her. If you ever consider writing another story with a focus on other characters, I'd love one with Eros and Psyche. That was always one of my favorite stories. Thanks for writing and sharing. I loved the story!

this is one of the most interesting interpretations of Hecate that I've come across.