Interesting chapter and plot and idea

like this here start I do

Great story

I'm just going to stop correcting shit in reviews which admittedly is a dick thing to do but at this point I've spent X5 the time writing out the previous corrections than I did actually reading the chapters.

"You can't be sad, hiding her emotions from everyone girl forever." What? This is a piece of dialogue between Elena and Holly from the former to the latter, and this genuinely confused me enough to stare at it for a solid five minutes trying to figure it out, I like the story and plot idea but this honestly makes me think no one proof read this.

"nice to meet you acquaintance" Should either be "nice to meet you" or Nice/Pleasure to make your acquaintence" and "rested a hand of his chest" should simply change of to on, other than these two spots I like the first chapter and I'm looking forward too and hoping the rest don't have mistakes like these

great story

Good story

I'd like a Ripper Holly. :P

I hope endgame won't be with Klaus, I like Damon much better.

mk

The only thing that annoys me is that she's a vampire so suddenly. We hadn't even found out why she was ably to do magic or how she was a witch in the first place

beautiful!

this is fantastic headed over to read Destiny :D

She reminds me of Lydia Martian from teen wolf so far because she thinks shes going crazy, but it just her powers