That's an...unusual reaction to fireworks. Perhaps she grew up in a war zone, thus she associates the firework noise with artillery, even unconsciously.

interesting can't wait for more

I'm going to be honest and tell you that at first I passed this over. I thought this was going to be one of those 'stuck-in-the-ice' fics that are pretty much the same plot with only different characters. I'm happy to find that this isn't the case here!

In fact, this is a really cute fic so far! I like how the fluff and romance is taking time to bloom, instead of it being like 'BAM!' and they're in love. SoulSilver may be my OTP, but slow love is still more satisfying to me.

You're doing a really great job so far! The only tip I have for you is to maybe make the dialog a bit less...formal. Using words such as 'I'll' and 'I'm' instead of 'I will' and 'I am' will make it seem more like the characters are actually talking. I can't think of the word for words such as 'I'll, I'm, It's, and We'll' but they're really helpful in making the dialog realistic.

Keep up the good work!

I like this fanfiction, especially Soul. By the way, what are they doing? I mean Gold and Crystal while Silver and Soul together. Anyway, the thing that i impressed is when Silver commanded his Feraligatr and Weavile to used Ice Shard and Shadow Ball to make a fireworks. Maybe, it's because i like contest(in anime). Anyway, keep writing and updating pleaseeeeeee...

I KNEW IT! Soul is from reality! Earth, I mean. Our world. It was the puppy that made me think that. And if she was frozen, that meant she was frozen at an earlier point in time. Okay, one of two things could answer all of out questions. Either Soul was frozen in the current time that we live in and, while she was stuck in that cave, animals around her all evolved into Pokemon. It's actually a theory that I've thought about on my own before. Or, she was from Earth, but somehow got sent to the Pokemon world and got stuck in a mountain for Dialga knows how long. I don't really know what's going to happen (I'm yet to have read the next chapter), but I hope it's as awesome as the other chapters!

Keep up the good work! Hope the next chapter is up soon! :D

Update soon!

This chapter was super cute with all the couple moments and Silver being such a sweety to Soul. I can't wait for the next chapter!

*squealing in progress, please wait until finished*

Wow! Just... wow! Keep it up and update soon or I'ma gonna cry. Okay, maybe not, but I look forward to it! :)

SOUL IS BEING SOSOOOSOOOOO ADPRABLE AND A CUTIE IN THIS CHAPTER! OwO

...but meanwhile Silver's just being a Tsundere haha xD

OOH IT LOOKS LIKE i'M AT THE LASTEST CHAPTER, SO i GOTTA WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!

can't wait for next chappy...! *falls anime style* w'

THIS STORY IS REALLY GETTING LOVELY, LIVELY, AND INTERESTING BY EACH CHAPTER AND SOUL IS SUCH A BUBBLY, FUN-LOVING GIRL THAT I THINK IS WONDERFUL BECAUSE IN OTHER SOULSILVERSHIPPING MANGA AU FANFICS, SHE'S NOT REALLY THE CHARACTER THAT'S ADORABLE AND BUBBLY.

BUT THAT'S WHAT MAKES YOUR FANFIC BETTER! BECAUSE YOU PUT HER IN THAT KIND OF PERSONALITY, WHICH IS MY FAVORITE KIND OF FANFIC! C:

OC-FREE DINO OUTTA HERE!

OOOOOOHH! ANOTHER SOULSILVERSHIPPING MANGA AU FANFIC! OwO

*glomps you*

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOSOSOO MUCH FOR MAKING A SOULSILVERSHIPPING MANGA AU BECAUSE THEY'RE NOT EASY TO FIND!

GET OVER HERE SO i CAN HUG YA! xD

AND HER NAME'S SOUL! YES! MOST PEOPLE RATHER USE LYRA OR KOTONE (Which is fine.) AND HER NAME IS SOUL IN THIS FANFIC! THANK YOU! CX *throws cookies at you*

and it has MangaQuestShipping too :3

OC-FREE DINO OUTTA HERE!

Oh do not worry, the surest thing is that tape-worms problems or something, the chapter, I am charmed with me, very prettily and tenderly, but, simultaneously very suspiciously ultimately, I wait with anxieties for the near chapter, it is still like that.

It's cute how much Soul loves everyone else, even though she barely knows them. And poor baby! The fireworks are triggering something in her, that's for sure...D:

I think technically the term for what a girl would wear to a Japanese festival is a kimono and the man's garment is the yukata, but I could be mistaken. I'm not Japanese so I'm definitely not the authority on this matter. So just ignore me if you know something I don't on this matter.

I've never really shipped Mangaquestshipping but you write it well, so I can definitely ship it in this story. :D You write all of your characters well; you really get the feel of them. No one is ever out of character at all-not even a little bit. Great work.

Your English consistently gets better and better every time you update. Honestly, you write better than most kids who speak English as their first language, and that's impressive. Good work, darling! I can't wait until the next update!

I love reading creative new Soulsilvershipping fanfics. Keep kicking ass. On to the next chapter for me.

Hi, dear! I may have commented as a guest earlier...anyway I just wanted to say that this is a really cool concept. The Soulsilvershipping tag falls either flat or dead a lot.

Though you're definitely a greenhorn when it comes to fic writing, I'm impressed by your commitment and clearly deep ideas about this story. Plus it takes a lot to get me to read a Pokespe fic.

Keep updating and kick some ass!