This really had me laughing, I think you wrote it beautifully. Although I had to reread the part with where he jumps on top of her and 'enters' her because that had me like 'oh, so they're naked, okay.' but I thinks it's really cute and I really liked it

jaja rin parece una niña pero me encanta pobre sesshoumaru le cortaron la inspiración

I loved it! It was funny, sweet, and loving and you managed to keep the characters in character! You did an excellent job!

wonderful. never expected the possibility that the both would marry but wonderful

Why is Jakin still traveling with Rin and lord Sesshomaru? Rin poses a good question

Ya it was really good and I liked how rin asks those questions that we all have been wondering (especially the first one)!

Lol, the unintentional pun. She is DYING to know why he revived her from death.

God Jaken can be so annoying. I never understood why he had Jaken travel with him in the first place. i guess after Rin it kind of made sense, her baby-sitter and all, but before that? God, why would Sesshomaru deal with such an annoyance.

Thanks for sharing.

Nice story! Its hilarious how like Jaken opens his big mouth lol. Update soon!

answer that que plzz

I love the last question very funny!

Good!... Both the questions & the story itself :)

Omgosh! This one-shot is probably my favorite one you've ever written! LMAO! I was seriously dying of laughter when Jaken came in! LOLOLOLOL! XD Seriously, you did a WONDERFUL job! :D

Muito bom, escreva mais, abraços

omg that was SO CUTE AND LOVELY AND SWEET. And steamy Jaken you cockblocker. More SessRin fics please _

Yes, why is jaken still with them?

Hahaha. I loved it! I always knew it was her smile.