| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Turmoil Within |
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   Halfcatharry chapter 1 . 8/18/2018 Please write the next chapter |
| ridiculous129 chapter 1 . 9/27/2014 Enjoying the story so far |
| GBTtown chapter 29 . 5/13/2012 An absolutely fantastic story. Too bad it wasn't completed. |
| amisara chapter 13 . 6/12/2011 boiled hearts sounds like an english delicacy; and while i in general like this story, i dislike the way every chapter ends with the title of hte chapter. reads like a bad soap opera. keep writing! |
| strauberry23 chapter 29 . 7/13/2010 Great story! Plz update soon! I love it! Not much, but it says it all. -Flora |
| Amisara chapter 21 . 2/11/2010 “We all have one, wouldn’t you agree old friend,” said Dumbledore, stepping from the shadow on the wall? punctuation in dialogue belongs within the quote marks not at the end of the sentence “We all have one, wouldn’t you agree old friend?” said Dumbledore, stepping from the shadow on the wall. |
| amisara chapter 15 . 2/11/2010 the way you use the title of the chapter to finish every chapter is SO not cute |
| Reader chapter 29 . 9/9/2006 Hey Man, what happened? You haven't updated in over a year. I've been waiting to see what happens. I love this story. Please update soon! I'll be looking for it. :) Later |
| Talon05 chapter 29 . 3/5/2006 Okay its been an horrendously long time since you published to be correct over half a year. I really hope you plan on writing more considering I'm still waiting for that effing kiss. So please update soon. |
| chris chapter 1 . 12/30/2005 Harry Potter and the Turmoil Within hey i luv ur story plz up date soon, i check everyday to see if yove up dated ... whats going to happen next? |
| triptpol85 chapter 29 . 8/17/2005 HOLY CRAP, I have been reading the entire story and I just realized I did not review because I was so engrossed in your story, HOLY CRAP, please updater again soon, I HAVE TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. This is propabely the best story I have read on this site, I just . . . wow, please please update again soon, I can not wait to see what happens next chapter, please please update again doon |
| fopalup1 chapter 29 . 8/14/2005 A good part! I'm glad you are continuing this story still. Are you going to continue from Hermione's point of view or go back to Harry's? Hope to see more in a shorter time frame. |
| me chapter 29 . 8/14/2005 great chapter as always |
| AnthonyR chapter 29 . 5/29/2005 The story is good and i hope you do continue the story soon. and I know how you feel in the last four years I have lost five people i care about |
| shaneisha chapter 26 . 3/11/2005 Please continue this is a wonderful story |
