Oh. My. Gods. That was adorable! I laughed so hard at the point when the goblins started pointing out Jareth's "good" qualities. That'd probably be the only time you'd see the Goblin King blush.

I loved it.

loved it. great work.

I agree with Frozen being awesome!

I also see a small reference to In Summer.

Awww, very sweet.

Very cute and fluffy. Favorite part had to be the goblins playing matchmaker.

So much fun and adorable mischief, the trolls and goblins are similar that way.

That was very fluffy! I saw all the references to frozen. .. they finished each others...sandwhiches! Well done.

I was giggling the whole time! The sandwiches, the "with you", the "crazy" (can I say something crazy?), everything was adorable! I was laughing at my computer and my brothers now think I'm crazy, but this story was super cute! I loved the allusions to Frozen, it put this story over the top! Good Luck!

Sooo adorably cute and fluffy, I LOVE IT. I can totally visualize this. I love Olaf. Sven too.

Very Cute! You should mark it as Complete though; unless you plan to do a prequel which could be very cute too.