Reviews for Hiccup
Anonymous Girl Gamer chapter 1 . 1/12/2018
Aww, this was adorable! I like how they named the child after Tris's mother.
Agent Skye Of Shield chapter 1 . 6/1/2015
Awwe :)
Cute story!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
So adorable!
Ihavehiccups chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
Did Natalie tris or tobias have the hiccups? Also you should write a fanfic where tris or Tobias gets the hiccups then the other person cures them with a kiss. That'd be cute.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
So did Natalie have the hiccups or did Tobias have the hiccups
Guestyguest chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
How strange... I accidentally came across this while I had the hiccups... :3
tris4eaton chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
This is cute! I see it only has four reviews (ha ha ha) so I figured I'd help you get to fifteen :)
Ecoalien123 chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
Aawwwwwwww I love this
Make a story for the baby and four again
ElysaLlove chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
Hey i really love this Os, it is so cute :) !
Can i ask you something in PM thanks ;) -Elysa
ImDiffrentSoWhat chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
Aw Four is a good father. He is so sweet to let Tris sleep. I love the idea of their baby having Tobias's eyes. It is so sweet it makes me really happy.
LilyBug95 chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
Awe this was adorable! Can you make another story about Natalie and Four pretty please.