| Reviews for The Elven Witch |
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   Speaks with Spirits chapter 11 . 6/8 I'm currently on chapter 11 of your story. I am enjoying it for the most part. I have noticed you are using the incorrect form of "your". "Your" is possessive indicating belonging (as in "your car". The proper form you should be using is "you're" as in "you are", such as "you're a WHAT?" Also, when writing conversations, don't put different speakers all together in a paragraph, give each sentence it's own line.b Hope this helps, Speaks |
| nini3773 chapter 17 . 5/15 Thank you for your gift of creation in creativity and originality making the story unique and beautiful! |
| arlena.ferrell chapter 17 . 5/15 Omg so BEAUTIFUL! |
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 17 . 5/12 I love it! |
| Angel JJK chapter 17 . 5/12 Sweet way to end the story. |
| Ravendeer chapter 16 . 5/12 are you going to finish this |
| NicoleR85 chapter 17 . 5/12 Another great chapter. I loved reading this story. Thank you for writing it. |
| Angel JJK chapter 16 . 5/11 What an action packed chapter. Til next time. |
| Giean86 chapter 16 . 5/11 omg.. i uave been waoting for this update.. i almost gave up all hope that this will be updated but i'm happy that this story was not abandoned |
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 16 . 5/10 I like it |
| nini3773 chapter 16 . 5/10 Sweet! Thanks! |
| LauraB90 chapter 16 . 5/10 can't wait to read more! |
| arlena.ferrell chapter 16 . 5/10 Yes! |
| NicoleR85 chapter 16 . 5/10 Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. |
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 15 . 12/6/2019 I really like it! |
