Reviews for Recoil
zigmas chapter 37 . 7/6
This is the funniest F.Y. to Kaiser EVER.
Various fics make him various levels of an asshole (from very to barely, but never NOT) - so he definitelydeservesthis.
MWAHAHAHA!
Heaven's Thesis chapter 46 . 7/5
Thank you for writing. its been excellent
HgSpartan chapter 46 . 7/2
This is, hands down, the best time travel fic I've read. Adding Aster was an interesting choice, but personally the shift in dynamic it caused wasn't to my taste. This was a very minor detractor however, and entirely a personal taste thing. I liked the lone wolf desperation. The Panacea parallel was great. I also loved the repeated use of the kiss to end Tt dreams, it made things surreal in a predictable way. I'm interested to see what happens with imaginary Tt. Is this Tt real? A psychic imprint? A delusion representing a second trigger for Taylor? A normal delusion which just represents her normal thought process? The denial aspect of this if it's part of her grief processing is excellent. Love this fic.
DracoArtemisLeopin chapter 46 . 6/24
Can't wait for the next chapter. And I'm guessing that it's because the kid never told Kinsey not to shoot her.
woodcutterw chapter 46 . 6/16
Tell me this isn’t dead? No update in seemingly 8 monthA and counting. And on that crazy of a cliffhanger!
DracoArtemisLeopin chapter 13 . 6/15
Only real problem I can see here is that Taylor, judging by the timeline SHOULD NOT KNOW THAT EIDOLON IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THE ENDBRINGERS. HE doesn't even know at this point. Nobody figures it out until Scion gets him to accept death with 4 simple words.
"You needed worthy opponents."
There is literally a chapter that is just that. Not trying to be an asshole or anything, I just can't remember the exact chapter in Worm that this comes into play, but I DO know that it's WELL after Gold Morning's started.
H Max Marius chapter 14 . 6/13
Loved the bit with the Robotech Cyclones! :)
RadicalEncounter chapter 46 . 6/7
"It will be revealed next chapter," you absolute fiend. I love it.
Guest chapter 46 . 6/4
YOU. ARE. AWESOME. Totally love your fanfictions and had a lot of fun reading them. Will be awaiting the next chapter! Keep up the good work
Grrobot chapter 3 . 5/21
"Taylor Snow," I responded as if automatically, then blinked.

Should have been JasonWTaylor Bourne instead, given the circumstances...
RadicalEncounter chapter 46 . 5/8
Ah, every chapter that drops for recoil makes my year, and then the suspense kicks in for months. Well written and engaging chapter (chapter 46) though I feel the anticipation of danger could have been drawn out a little longer. A bit abrupt towards the end. Still enjoyed the heck out of it.
121698 chapter 41 . 4/21
Couldn't you've just watched courtroom videos? Maybe get a couple of copies of what was written by someone who's job is to just copy shit down?
Akashic Records chapter 46 . 3/31
Well, shit. I can't wait to see the fallout from this.
leylinjan chapter 46 . 3/19
Love, love, love this! The story is great, I just couldn't put it down these past few days. All your stories are really engaging, but this one is perhaps my favourite:)
Cybergades chapter 27 . 3/7
yeah i just can't do it anymore. the premise is really interesting which makes it all the worse because i'd really like to see where the story goes. but it's like pulling teeth trying to stay engaged. the whole Taylor and Andrea thing just destroy's the momentum every time. it's way to OC for her character and there wasn't any reasonable explanation for it.

Anyways love the writing, good grammar and sentence structure. the characters are engaging. only issue is the major OCness with Taylor, which ultimately is your call as the author.
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