I've never read a fanfic so true to character. Amazing.

This is a thing of beauty

That was funny and amazing! Good job

I love how you're writing sounds like it would really come out of the characters mouths.

Ha ha, I loved this! That was a perfect way to end this story! I can just see them being so humiliated by discovering that they had an audience, but I love Lilith's explaination!

That was hot! You write for them so well.