plz update

i know it's been years since you updated this but i hope you find the time to finish this one day! only two chapters but it got me hook alreadyi hope you have a great day! thank you for sharing your story!

Great story!

Bloody hell. Could you please update?

GOD i wish this was finished! i think about this story all the time!

Man, this is awesome. I hope you return to it at some point

Hi. I see you had not updated in a long time but i want to encorage you to do it agan. I have been a fan of your stories and I really looking forward to se how this one ends. Please udate soon.

I friggin' love this story! It's one of my two favorite one-shots, the other is "Peaches" by Geezerwench. After three years, you're probably not even writing fan fiction any more. But, I wish it was finished.

Loving this fic and where it's going! Just wish that there was more of it! ;o)

Sucks that this never got finished. Hope OP is well and just moved on

i'm dying to read the continuation of this

oh my goodness please please finish this. i'm dying to see them finally get together.

Wonderful story can't wait for the next chapter

I really hope you continue this story and finish it! I'm loving your portrayal of Jasper and that Alice and Edward aren't the bad guys in this. It's got the perfect amount of angst and pining. I really would love to see a happy ending for Jasper and Bella here.

This was definitely a new way to do a story. I haven't seen any ideas like yours. I like the story so far and hope to see new chapters