Oh no no no...where did you go? That is not a spot to disappear!

I hope you haven't abandoned this story! please please! We so need an ending. Loved this AU, such an interesting way of seeing it.

Can't wait for the continuation. Please! Please

This keeps getting better and better and I'm terribly sad I'm already halfway through it. And all the movie references are making me giggle like crazy and yep, i totally agree on the amazing hotness of Mac's short 'do.

Ooh, this is such a GREAT read. I'm already hooked

I miss this story, so much!

Please tell me you are not leaving it there. This story deserves to be finished. I need to know what's going on! Honestly I'm having a little trouble separating Wallace and veronica, they are just always 'BFFs' in my head. But this story is so interesting that it doesn't even matter. Even the law enforcement inaccuracies are overshadowed by the greatness of this story to make them seem pointless.

Please don't abandon this story. I like how you have Logan grown up and a cop. Other FF have Veronica as the cop and Logan needing her help. This reversal of roles has so much potential. Logan playing the cop is perfect along with Wallace as his partner. He was never the pretty boy son of a movie star and the grittiness of his attitude as a cop is more Logan.

Please take us to the bedroom and the post-coital conversation.

Pls update soon. Each chapter gets better.

update please

Update please!

I don't mean to sound whiny, but... When will there be more? I am so loving this AU. I love Logan as a detective and just...Lily marrying Aaron and inevitably divorcing him? Brilliant. Duncan in politics and Veronica as his wife? Also brilliant.

The image of Logan in a black tie and white dress shirt with the sleeves rolled up to his elbows? I can't remember if he was described like that but it is what I picture and it is totally working for me. Detective Logan...

Your writing is very good and I eagerly await more.

Update please!

I am loving this story! I like to see the more vulnerable side of Veronica without it being completely OOC. Also you're the first person to make the connection of Beaver's nickname for me! I really like where the story is going. I'm not sure how Cassidy, Aaron and Duncan are connected, but I'm sure you'll reveal more with time. Please update soon!

please continue. love this story

Please update! :) so wonderful!