You made her turn out to be like annie! :(

This makes no sense. That dance would have taken place at the end of her victory tour, months before finding out what the Quarter Quell would be. She would not be considering allies for the next games, nor discussing it like she already knows that she'll be in the arena. I consider this a complete failure.

Lead to bigger things...you mean heartbreaking?

I almost cried it's so sad.

This it is so sad, I love this story but it is so sad. It is devastating, I really just want a happy ending for them but they can't have one, it's so sad.

I adore this!

Dang ittttttt DDD: But this was really good even though it was absolutely heart-wrenching.

Dang, so heavy :)

I felt like Katniss was a fair bit out of character, she's not usually that angry all the time and she usually makes a lot better decisions and doesn't just 'do things', but Finnick was still so I damn perfectly amazing that I somehow still loved this fanfic!

Awww so sad but somehow super cute at the same time... I really did love it though, this is probably the only fanfic I've ever liked that had a sad ending, and I think it suited anyway. Mockingjay is dark, so you stuck true to the original books which not many people do anymore :) please write some more though!

Two things, one: gahhh, depressing epilouge much; two: good writing and story even the epilouge for all its depresiness.

I love this couple, and I wished she felt something for him. HOw I love Finnick.

I don't know if you did this on purpose, but Plutarch's dance was at the end of Victory Tour, which was before Snow announced the Victors as Tributes. In canon, Finnick would be trying to get to know a fellow Mentor not Tribute.

Either way, great start!

*sniff sniff* that was soooo sad!I started to cry..

this is so fluffy in a none cute way but good