I really love it! they're so cute together :)
Keep writting, you've got talent!

There are a few grammatical errors (you're/your, here/hear, lack of capitalization at the beginning of quoted sentences, lowercase "i" instead of "I"), but overall your story is very good and well-developed. Though, towards the end, I didn't get why James was suddenly angry towards Lily. He seemed oddly confrontational. Also, though I get that the "Lover, etc" thing was inspiration for this story, I didn't really understand how it fit in with everything.

That aside, I really did enjoy this story. It's obvious that you put a lot of work into it, and that shines through. I loved the cuddling scene, it was easily my favorite scene out of all the similar ones to it throughout this site. Overall, this is a lovely story. :)

Wow, this was great! Maybe a little long as it took me a good couple of hours to read. But it is most definitely one of the best pieces I've ever read. It is so well written and really brings a ton of different emotions out of you, something that many stories have not accomplished and have not had that effect on me. Thanks again for the amazing story, you really are an incredible writer! :)