| Reviews for Fortune's Fool |
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Pica Britanica chapter 12 . 11/30/2014 This is an excellent story, I'm looking forward to reading what comes next. :) |
marvxl chapter 12 . 11/29/2014 Love this story! Your writing is so good and I loved how you portrayed Pasiphae, sorry I haven't reviewed other chapters, I was so busy just trying to ready more! XD I hope you do write a following story :) |
Procrastination Is My Game chapter 12 . 11/23/2014 That was fantastic! Great idea and wonderfully written. I would love to see a following story - how will everyone react to Jason at the palace? I look forward to reading the next :) |
Ancalagon chapter 1 . 11/20/2014 Brilliant start! I love the human sides of Minos and Pasiphae. Still, I look forward to their ruthlessness as well! |
Guest chapter 12 . 11/12/2014 Ther needs to be follow up story. |
ibliniy chapter 12 . 10/12/2014 eeepp! nice, creepy ending! |
watlocked chapter 7 . 9/8/2014 I like the cultural rules you're introducing in this as part of the plot - it flows very smoothly with the world that the show established, and is certainly realistically plausible. I am really enjoying this, though I can't read it as often as I would like too. |
Teoryn chapter 12 . 7/12/2014 Another wonderful chapter as always. I am so happy that Minos is going to accept him into the family….well kind of as long as Jason doesn’t mess it up. It kind of gives a new definition to scary step-father. This one could really get away with killing his step son. Then to have the woman who was an enemy suddenly be his only alley in this almost life threatening situation would unnerve anyone! I think Jason has every right to be as broken and upset about the whole situation! He should probably be even more tense but he is a true hero and that is the only thing probably holding him together. I really look forward to the next story. (: I don’t even have to wait long either as it is already posted! Yay! Now if I could just skip work today…..oh well. Awesome story, you have a wonderful talent for weaving an amazing story! |
Teoryn chapter 11 . 7/12/2014 So very sweet how this chapter ended it shows just how much a dad Hercules is to Jason. You do an awesome job as a writer bringing out the emotions in the characters. I like how it was a slow burn to get to that moment where he finally breaks and everything becomes too much for him to handle. It is all the small things that make this story awesome. When he runs away rather than walk home with Hercules is sad in itself but it makes perfect sense that Jason wants to get away. After all, he did get what he wanted which was Hercules free but he had to pay a price that will change his entire life. Well done as always. (: |
twilotter lover chapter 12 . 7/3/2014 Noooooo why finish it there :( I want more! This is an Amazing atlantis fic! Sequel maybe? |
sachi chapter 12 . 6/29/2014 Hey I really enjoyed reading this story, plz continue it as a sequel or something. I'm looking forward to know what will happen to Jason in the palace :-) |
Angel chapter 12 . 6/28/2014 Please continue this! I absolutely love this story! I need to know whats going to happen now that Jason will be spending time at the palace. |
Firehead Dragon chapter 12 . 6/28/2014 THIS CAN'T BE THE END ohhh goodness gracious this has literally been the highlight of whatever week the newest chapters have come out on! Your writing is seriously amazing and I absolutely love your stories! Pleease continue in another story, I will love you forever! (Even though you have already created one of the most brilliant things in my life which already makes me love you coz you're an amazing writer!) I would love to see this carry on! :) |
Blue Penhorwood chapter 12 . 6/27/2014 Brilliant story and I think it would be a great idea to continue. |
RougeBlatant chapter 12 . 6/27/2014 Oh folklore, stuff is going down in Atlantis, one don't trust her... |