Good start to the story. Can’t wait for more

I liked seeing the rest of the household's reactions to Henry and Eliza's relationship. :)

This is a really awesome story so far! I'm very excited to see more into Henry and Eliza's life. You wrote Col Pickering very well; he was fun to read about. The scene with the ring in Ch 1 was wonderfully sweet! The only other critique I have is when she and Henry confess their feelings, Eliza says something like, "you made me feel worth it." On the contrary, Henry unintentionally made her feel unworthy of herself.
Please write more chapters! I'd love the to read them!

It's great! Pickering just being Pickering. I'd like a whole load more!