This is a goddamn masterpiece.

You're an amazing writer!

I loved your characterization so much. The entire piece is really funny, and I kept on laughing midway. The turtle thing...and the ending.

Everything. As a truth, here. Everything is really awesome!

Thanks for putting this up here,
-Reila

Please make a sequel!

This has a few feels, some sexy goodness, and several snicker worthy moments. I started cackling at the end D It was fun.

Hashanah, just the right amount of zanny goodness. It was thoroughly enjoyable.

Reviews: I do not recall seeing any mistakes.

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this was really quite amusing, thanks for the read! :)

Duuuuuust this is perfect! :D I'll snicker for days on "turtle" XDXDXD and the way you weave into the darker, more serious undertones, it's amazing! I can't help but wonder what Cloud ate for dinner to have this kind of nightmare... :D and the end was a killer punch :D

- Zsu -