if Bella is eighteen they could leave any time.

why should they be hostile to Bella, they haven't seen her in years? it always seemed stupid to me that they would profess their concern about her spending time with them but not tell her why.

It's so good, I hope you come back to finish it one day.

So I completely understand having writers block and just not having the inspiration ( currently there myself, have been for years) but I'm left hanging and I'm so freaking curious. I want to know more. It's almost a need. I'm not gonna lie I did have somewhat of a hard time getting into this story (been way to long since I've really been I terested in twilight honestly) but once I start a story i usually finish it... unless it doesn't make any sense or is just really poorly written (which i can't say much my first story was written in script form and just plain horrendous) ItAoAA is pretty awesome tho and i would like to read more. I'd love for bella to meet Peter and Charlotte, who in my opinion never get to play enough in many stories, I'd love to see what happens when bella changes, if ur gonna go along the same lines of BD with that or not. I'm just all around curious and kinda sad that I won't find out. I hope u r doing well tho.

I haven’t fully finished the chapters you’ve written yet but I’m already in love with your Jasper and Southern Bella. I’m in love with your take on the story and flow of your writing. I know in notes you’ve said that you are unhappy with how certain chapters turn out, but i’d respectively like to disagree.

I’m very much a lurker as I don’t write, I don’t have the time or the imagination, but I’m an avid reader and have been for years. While I dislike Meyer’s characterisation of Jasper and Bella - they are my favourite couple to read. You more than do them justice and I can’t wait till this story makes your list of WIPs that you are continuing. :)

please update. I love this book so much. I need more!

Hi,
I loved the first chapters, but the last ones I don't like so much.
Bella is too depressive and jasper can't really help her.
Bye sunseren

WRITE MORE!

please update soon. Im in loves with all your stories I have read.

I love this story
I can't wait to read more to find out what happens next
Hope you can update soon :)
~Belle

what happened to that ass jacob? i hope jasper f...d him up good!

will there be more chapters?

I just reread this again...not sure how many times now but my only complaint is it’s not finishedI understand life happens and muses take a break, sometimes for an indefinite amount of time, but I do hope you come back to this story and finish it.

I love how jasper and Bella are learning how to be together. I am curious if Charlie will wake up and decide to be a parent when Bella leaves with jasper.

I love how protective Jasper is of Bella! I would love to see more of that.

Also, will Bella get to meet Charlotte and peter? I think it’d be cool if jasper and Bella left the Cullen’s completely and jasper went back to leading his own coven. Throughout the story I got the impression he was on with the Cullen’s because he needed to be so he could meet Bella again. I think now would be the right time for them to break away even if the Cullen’s don’t realize it’s going to happen.

What happened to the bossy powerful Bella from the beginning of the fic? It's like she is a completely different character.
I love Jasper though! And I like the pairings

So I just started binge reading this and owowie, do I love it? Really hope you continue working on this, and hopefully post updates often. Am in love with Jasper/Bella mates war fics 3 3