Bon sang ! Je suis frustrée au possible ! Cette histoire promet un excellent script complètement gâché par la désorganisation complète de l'écriture. Il faut relire trois fois chaque paragraphe pour déchiffrer qui est concerné et ce qui est raconté. Aucune structure du texte pour indiquer les changement de point vu et la ponctuation entourant les dialogues laisse à désirer, sans parler de savoir quelle phrase est dans le dialogue. A côté de ça, on du mal à se représenter la scène car les descriptions brillent par leur absence.
Honnêtement, prenez une béta, par pitié ! C'est à s'arracher les cheveux de frustration.

Ps: Ma critique ne se veut pas méchante mais constructive, je suis juste envahie d'une frustration que j'essaie de contenir au mieux.
Pps: Je suis française et je n'ai pas le vocabulaire adéquat pour exprimer toute ma pensée en Anglais donc je le fais dans ma langue maternelle. Du coup, je vous recommande l'utilisation de Google Translation.

lol, Impossible to keep track of who's upset with whom and why. I guess this is a take off of a Cary Grant movie with multiple actress's in a thriller come comedy only difference is people in NYC then weren't as gullible as Andy Sachs? It's enjoyable to reread these stories over the years as moods change adding new perspectives and characters.

Jena~ ty for the entertainment.

I had thought Andy was going to be given a position under Irv’s oversight, so her as a writer answering to Miranda will be priceless. If Miranda restrains from having Emily kill her. Andy’s suggestion for an article on tongue wrestling and Miranda’s response foretells an intriguing future.

One doesn’t hear mention of Erma Bombeck much any more.

Your lovely words make me feel good all over...

hank you, Sybil

Thank you for this enjoyable story although I was beginning to think either Andrea or Miranda was going to become permanently bi-polar in the confusing but entertaining exchanges...Your an intriguing writer, thank you again.

Merci, pour cette histoire vraiment captivante.
I read your story for the first time today. And it just kept me on my chair all the night untill the end: make me cry, make me hope, irritated, sad, restless... it's an amazing story.
Sorry for my english.
And I really want to thank you for this treasure of writing

I love every one of your stories but the one thing that turns me off when reading is the Sachs calling, its not something that fits, andrea or andy dependending from who it is , the Sachs! it is so manly and off.
Please take this with the utmost respect to your writing, thanks for your stories, recently finding them.

How is it that this story doesn't have enough favorites?! Insane people, most likely. I enjoyed every second of this beautiful story.

The push and pull was everything in this story absolutely love it

Really fine story. Interesting twists and turns. Fun characterizations. Great AU. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Brilliantly masterful! :)

Congratulations for your fic, it was quite interesting and fun, but sometimes also frustrating, I say, up to this couple and their personalities were too exasperating
as they fought and separated to return and then go to fight again XD.
I hope you keep writing more stories because, frankly, you do very well.

P.S. Sorry if I have an error in the message, English is not my native language so I am somewhat disastrous when drafted a message.

Loved the story and it will be putting it on my reread list.

Ok, I'll play along...but it seems strange that Miranda, astute businesswoman would sign a legal document without legal advice.