I liked it but Amy was actually a kissogram not a police officer, and she lived with her aunt not her parents. So just me being a picky nerd really is the only flaw. Lovely plot!

This was great! If you make a sequal of this some how it would be amazing. Good luck writing more stories :D

asombroso... deberías continuar con esta historia

wow i didn't expect that to progress so quickly i kind of want to find ou tthe backstory of the parallel universe but also its kind of scary and mysterious thing that isnt usually my thing but on the other hand if it had a happy ending i'd be happy. But evil doctor is scary. So many questions about this world and i dont even know if i want answers.

OMG YES! This is great! I glad that you keep writing about these two. They are my OTP but not a lot of people write about them or ship them so thank you. I hope you will continue wrting for them and maybe even write a full fic. I hope you see this and realize how much these mean to me.