Ooh nice ending.

Honestly, that grandma is such an amazing character. I love her so much.

Noooooo! how could you kill all the good characters there was so many relationships destroyed why...

please can you re-write a separate story where everyone lives and goes on with their relationships please

Unfortunately, Kise dying didn't make me (very) sad because he is too irritating. GOMEN KISE FANGIRLS!
Postscript : P.S. stands for postscript XP

I still dnt get wat exactly ohiwara is. Is he in human form? A mini dragon?

Extremely similar to mulan, bt intresting start

Okay... where to start.
Well I felt that at the beginning of this story it wouldn't be very... well my type of story. There were lot of interruptions in the story or things you explained a bit to much. Now hold on, don't get mad yet.

There are a lot of things I felt were out of place, especially after just binge reading this. There were a few parts where it seemed like you treated Kuroko too much like Mulan. Reiko's statement about be a cross-dresser and the guide to being a man being the main two. But, after a while, you stopped doing that.

Now that we're done with that, let's get to the awesome things you did. I absolutely loved the premise of this story. I loved that you brought in characters from other anime's, such as Ceil. I found it amusing.

I also liked that you killed off characters, although I was a little sad because I do like Kise. But it was necessary for the story, and well written. And, although I saw it coming, Kuroko's death was very sad.

Anyways, I guess what I'm trying to say is; even though the beginning was a bit rough, I really enjoyed this. I just wanted to point out those things in hopes that you'll become an even better author, instead of just getting mad. However, if you wish to get mad, you can always message me and yell there.
Keep writing awesome fics,
SK

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I laughed so hard when you mentioned the Phantomhives! Nice work!

Oh I think I know! Shogi pieces are usually the same color, most I believe are made from wood. The only way you can tell the difference between the opponents piece and your piece is the direction they're pointing towards.

"My children never caused trouble, they all became acupuncturists," Kagami declared.
Don't you mean Taiga? He is part of the Kuroko family now right?

Oh my God, I've spent the last chapters in a tearful mess ;-;

Anyway, congratulations for the good work! I always thought lacked the reality of war in Mulan, but ... Oh my heart ;-;

I hope they can live happily and enjoy the love this time. Waiting anxiously the sequel 3

Your story was awesome! keep the good work!
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oh my ghosh. please let them meet again. please let that happen. PLEASE.

Please make a sequel! Please! XD