nice

It's rather interesting enough to get someone to start reading with just enough for someone to want more yet not be sure what will be happening.

Well done and can't wait for the update

nice

I love the start of your story.

Perfectly written.

Please keep up the good work.

I must admit that I didn't understood a lot of sentences in this story. Maybe you should reread it after a few days or get a beta.

From what I understood, Harry is no longer a horcrux and that he is far more depressed than in the original book. Well, let's where you are going.

So this abused my feels, which probably means you're a good writer, but I have a question. How does this mean that Lily isn't Lily?