OMG! I strangley love this I realize you've got a little series going for this and I don't think you can understand how happy that makes me. I'm about to go and read them all SLEEP IS FOR THE WEEK!
ps. I seemed to have found myself being okay with no Sam just a little fyi. lol!

I very much enjoyed this story. This is a great idea as to how Eliot and Dean could meet! Aaaand I'm off to check for a sequel. ;)

Definitely a cliffhanger feel. Good thing I'm coming to the story kinda late, so I i/know/i there are "sequels".

Ouch, Sam dead hurt... but it's a great starting point for AU.

You really do a great job capturing the voice of the different characters.

I greatly enjoyed the fic. Loved your characterizations and how you told the story: wording and POV.

Kick ass beginning!

LOVED

Love it!

I enjoyed the chapter. If I didn't like it I wouldn't have finished it. I'm still upset you would kill of Sam and keep Charlie instead, oh wellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.

you might want to reread the chapter for spelling and tenses.
It continues to be good thou I hate that you not only killed off Sam but got rid of Castiel too.

still liking it-have a few mistakes in spelling. 5th paragraph from bottom is a little unclear I'm thinking you mean they stitched themselves up and not each other.

paragraph 8, last sentence should be: No, he doesn't want to leave Portland either.
Otherwise, the chapter is good.

I've only recently discovered the fanfiction archive as I am new to the internet. I am a big fan of both leverage and supernatural.
So far I have been enjoying the Prologue and want to read more.

Love it!