Moral of the story! Everything can have a happy ending!

please make Zane good

well, just like my name, noice.

Good story but rushed ending

If only monsters had phones then aphrodite could just tweet them to death.

If Aphrodite is around which she should be then Oceanus is already dead cause she was born from his remains

The 300 Spartans and several thousand Athenians you mean.

No more an pleuse?

Some of this makes no sense. And it is pissing me off. Even if it is for plot, Phoebe and Zoë should not be as weak as they are. When it comes to pure skill, the Huntresses should be able to destroy Zane and Annabeth without taking a hit. They're thousa ds of years old why Zane and Annabeth are what, 14?

ahhhh
my heart just melted

I'd pretty firmly agree with calling this mediocre. It definitely has problems. The biggest of which is how deep their feelings are after a single meeting and then absolutely nothing for 2000 years.

That said, it had some unique ideas, the grammar and spelling were good, and it was a pretty enjoyable read overall.

It's *definitely* above average for this fandom.

Great story very interesting hope you write more!

Great story dude, loved it and can't wait to read the sequel!

love the way you ended it. especially the last para. great job!

By "blunt-tipped arrow" I take it you mean "boxing-glove arrow"